Hello, my name is Rigden Aunapuu, nickname rikz. I live in Tallinn. I'm 13 years old. I have 1 sister and 1 brother. I study at Tallinn Co-Educational Gymnasium. My hobby is Karate, but I hate it. I Like computer games, like counter strike and san andreas multiplayer.
Hi Rigden, welcome to English blogging!
ReplyDeleteThe sentences you have written are a good start! Now, please see the instructions once again to make it complete (*hint* 'write at least 5 sentences in English to introduce yourself').
PS If you want to write 'mina olen' in short form, you should write 'I'm' - at the moment you are missing apostrophe (ülakoma). Example: I'm 13 years old.
You can add the sentences and do the changes in your posting with 'edit' function. When you are logged in, it's in the 'Posting' section; pick 'Edit posts' from there.
Well done!
ReplyDeleteSome more small ideas here.
In the 2nd half of the first sentence, you should also write full sentence: '.., my nickname is Rikz'.
In the last sentence, there is no need to write 'Like' with capital letter (suurtäht) - the sentence has already started with 'I'.
In the same sentence: the names of the computer games, just like other names, are written with capital letters: 'Counter Strike' and 'San Andreas Multiplayer'.